Homework

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Thank you for sharing your stories! I really enjoyed reading it. Anyway, always be safe when going to work. I know that you have a tough job. Anyway, please review my corrections. See you tomorrow.

~Kelly^^

Does the weather affect your mood? How do gloomy days make you feel?
Yes, Totally the weather affect my mood! Exactly saying, Temporature affect my mood.

>> Yes. Totally! The weather affects my mood. Exactly! I am saying that temperature affect my mood.

When it is cold, I cannot do anything even my work.

>> Correct.

More it is colder, More I don\'t want to do anything. 

>> When it is colder, I don\'t want to do anything.
Two weeks ago, It fells snow and It was badly cold.

>> Two weeks ago, it snowed and it was badly cold.

And airconditioning system in office was frozen and broken.

>> And the air conditioning system in the office was frozen and broken.

So, I was wondering in my office, saying \"OMG, I\'m really cold now.

>> Correct.

Unnie, I cannot work today.

>> Correct.

I want to go home.

>> Correct.

Where is team leader.

>> Where is my team leader?

I want to be approved to use my montly holiday and to go to home early by my teamleader.

>> I want my team leader to approve my monthly holiday application so I could go home early.

Why she is too late!!\"

>> Why is she late?

Of course, She was late for snow.

>> Of course, She was late because of the snow.

She lives in the town which is far from our office.

>> She lives in a town which is far from our office.

Coming office from her home is taken 1 hours.

>> It takes one hour from her place to our office.

My team leader couldn\'t get my office, But, I could be approved by other team leader.

>> If my team leader couldn\'t make it to the office, I application could be approved by another team leader.

So I went to my home.

>> Correct.

I drinked a cup of tea , wrapping around myself with my blanket.

>> I drank a cup of tea , and  wrapped myself with my blanket.

I had a sleep for 14hours that day.

>> I had fourteen hours of sleep that day.

I think I\'m a bear.

>> Correct.