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Hello [이름]!!!
Thank you for your homework... I can say that you are really happy and satisfied with your life.
Happiness will start from ourselves. What\'s inside our hearts can make you happy and sad, so we need to store happy thoughts and positive things inside our hearts so that good things will come out from it.
T. Jeny
When we have some problems to handle, It\'s easy to feel life is very tough.
>>When we have to handle some problems, it\'s easy to feel that life is very tough.
But I think the thing that I have worry to consider is to give us vitality.
>>But I think the thing that we have to consider is how can we give meaning to life.
Otherwise, If only all peaceful life persist without any adversity, there is nothing fun in our life.
>>Otherwise, if we only have a peaceful life without adversity, I think there is nothing is fun to life.
A proper hardship and a proper happiness are needed in our life.
>>Proper hardships and proper happiness are needed in life.
Good matching is to make affluent our life.
>>Having a good combination makes an affluent life.
I think that is happiness.
>>correct
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