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2016-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~~*^^* Did you have good holidyas? I took lots of rest..hehe I feel so good..I guess I told you about the most embarrasing moment.. My shirt was torn in P.E class because of the ball.. Aside from this, I am embarrased when I can't understand what teacher says in my class. I know that I don't need to be like that..but I get red in the face when I cca't understand the meaning of the sentences.. 1. I visit my parents more often than my brothers do. 2. He thinks he always knows better 3. Out of all my siblings, I visit my parents the most often 4. David did worse than he thought he would do on his test. 5. I did the worst out of all the students on my test.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Yes, I remember the story about your PE shirt. ^^

You were such a tough girl, then. ^^

I also feel embarrassed whenever I make a mistake in front of an older person.

Sometimes, I cannot stop thinking about it,

but as time goes by, I learned to forget some of them.

The holidays have made me feel great as well.

It\'s so nice to spend a day without anything to do sometimes. ^^

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

Hi~~*^^* Did you have good holidyas?

>> Hi! *^^* Did you have a good holiday?
I took lots of rest..hehe

>> Correct!
I feel so good..I guess I told you about the most embarrasing moment..

>> Correct! [embarrassing]
My shirt was torn in P.E class because of the ball..

>> Correct!
Aside from this, I am embarrased when I can\'t understand what teacher says in my class.

>> Correct! [embarrassed]
I know that I don\'t need to be like that..but I get red in the face when I cca\'t understand the meaning of the sentences..
>> Correct! [can\'t]

1. I visit my parents more often than my brothers do.

>> Correct!
2. He thinks he always knows better

>> Correct!
3. Out of all my siblings, I visit my parents the most often

>> Correct!
4. David did worse than he thought he would do on his test.

>> Correct!
5. I did the worst out of all the students on my test.

>> Correct!

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