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2016-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I prefer to travel with my friends. Idon't like to be alone. I usually like to do something alone such as shopping, going to the gym..and so on.. These are the things that I always do...but traveling is different.. When I see something good, I want to share with my people.. it makes the moment more valuable. 1. I have visited many countries. 2. She knows how to play many songs. 3. He doesn't eat much rice. 4. How much money does he have? 5. He has many bottles of wine at home.

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Hi Miss [이름]! Somebody once said, \"Happiness is only real when shared.\" I cannot imagine myself traveling alone. I think it is a scary thing. And although most of the time I prefer to be alone, I also like being with my friends sometimes. And by doing things with them, I become really happy. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]! See you later! Teacher Anne   I prefer to travel with my friends. Idon\'t like to be alone. >> Correct! [I don\'t]I usually like to do something alone such as shopping, going to the gym..and so on.. >> Correct!These are the things that I always do...but traveling is different.. >> Correct!When I see something good, I want to share with my people.. >> Correct!it makes the moment more valuable. >> Correct!1. I have visited many countries.>> Correct!2. She knows how to play many songs.>> Correct!3. He doesn\'t eat much rice.>> Correct!4. How much money does he have?>> Correct!5. He has many bottles of wine at home. >> Correct!

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