homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, many women aren't easy to have their job in my country.
I am a luck woman for having one.
So I can buy many things for my family.
I I love my family.
My family is my life so I can't live without them.
So, they are helping me with my life.
Saving money is very important in my life.
It is to help my life to plan.
강사 첨삭
In my opinion, many women aren\'t easy to have their job in my country.
>> In my opinion, it is not easy for women to have a job in my country.
I am a luck woman for having one.
>> I am a lucky woman for having one.
So I can buy many things for my family.
>> correct!
I I love my family.
>> correct!
My family is my life so I can\'t live without them.
>> correct!
So, they are helping me with my life.
>> correct!
Saving money is very important in my life.
>> correct!
It is to help my life to plan.
>> it is helping me to plan for my life.
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