Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
10 minutes are too short to share my story in the Philippines.^^
Anyway, I am very glad to know a lot of things about the Philippines.
I believe that my experiences in the Philippines would be good to our class.
See you tomorrow.
Who is a woman from history that you respect? Why?
As a student who is studying politics, I respect Hillary Rodham Clinton, one of the politician in the USA.
Many people admit that she is smarter than Bill Clinton, her husband and the former president.
Nevertheless, she had supported her husband instead of being a president herself.
I guess that she wanted to show her political abilities in order to overcome some prejudice about her in those days.
Now, she became an irreplaceable candidate in the U.S. Democratic Party, and she is just waiting for being a new female president in the USA.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Welcome back! I cannot even tell you how excited and stoked I am to have you back!
I\'m looking forward to hearing more stories from you.
Thanks for doing your homework!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.>> CORRECT!
10 minutes are too short to share my story in the Philippines.^^
>> Ten minutes is too short to share my stories about the Philippines.Anyway, I am very glad to know a lot of things about the Philippines.
>> CORRECT! I believe that my experiences in the Philippines would be good to our class.
>> I believe that my experiences in the Philippines would be helpful in our class.See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT! As a student who is studying politics, I respect Hillary Rodham Clinton, one of the politician in the USA.
>> CORRECT!
>> one of the politicians
OR >> As a student who is studying politics, I respect Hillary Rodham Clinton, one politician in the USA. - betterMany people admit that she is smarter than Bill Clinton, her husband and the former president.
>> CORRECT! Nevertheless, she had supported her husband instead of being a president herself.
>> Nevertheless, she had supported her husband, instead of running for the presidency herself.I guess that she wanted to show her political abilities in order to overcome some prejudice about her in those days.
>> CORRECT! Now, she became an irreplaceable candidate in the U.S. Democratic Party, and she is just waiting for being a new female president in the USA.
>> Now, she has become an irreplaceable candidate in the U.S. Democratic Party, and she is just waiting to be the first female president of the USA.
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