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Hi Miss [이름]!
Indeed! Celebrities need to be careful of their behavior.
They can be an important influence to young people.
Have you heard of Kang Dong Won?
I think he is an excellent example. ^^;
By the way, who was the celebrity that you admired when you were younger?
I\'d like to know more about him soon. ^^;
Take care, Miss [이름]!
See you!
Teacher Anne
Right..I think celebrities should be good examles for teenagers..
>> Correct! [examples]
They have the period of adolescence...
>> They are in their adolescence.
It means they have lots of complains and fails in many ways..
>> It means they have a lot of complaints and failures in many ways.
so they try to find the person who they admire and this person influence them in good or bad parts..
>> So they try to find a person whom they admire and this person will influence them in good or bad ways.
Celebrities can be an idol to them.
>> Celebrities can be an idol for them.
1. Being an orphan is hard. It\'s not easy to grow up without parents.
>> Correct!
2. She got married on 25.
>> at
3. The orangutan is along ( = one of) the smartest animals in the world.
>> among
4. She was lying beneath ( = under) the blanket, resting.
>> Correct!
5. The temperature will go down to 10 degrees below zero tonight.
>> Correct!
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