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2016-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Right..I think celebrities should be good examles for teenagers.. They have the period of adolescence. It means they have lots of complains and fails in many ways..so they try to find the person who they admire and this person influence them in good or bad parts.. Celebrities can be an idol to them. 1. Being an orphan is hard. It's not easy to grow up without parents. 2. She got married on 25. 3. The orangutan is along ( = one of) the smartest animals in the world. 4. She was lying beneath ( = under) the blanket, resting. 5. The temperature will go down to 10 degrees below zero tonight.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Indeed! Celebrities need to be careful of their behavior.

They can be an important influence to young people.

Have you heard of Kang Dong Won?

I think he is an excellent example. ^^;

By the way, who was the celebrity that you admired when you were younger?

I\'d like to know more about him soon. ^^;

Take care, Miss [이름]!

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

Right..I think celebrities should be good examles for teenagers..

>> Correct! [examples]
They have the period of adolescence...

>> They are in their adolescence.

It means they have lots of complains and fails in many ways..

>> It means they have a lot of complaints and failures in many ways.

so they try to find the person who they admire and this person influence them in good or bad parts..

>> So they try to find a person whom they admire and this person will influence them in good or bad ways.

Celebrities can be an idol to them.
>> Celebrities can be an idol for them.
1. Being an orphan is hard. It\'s not easy to grow up without parents.

>> Correct!

2. She got married on 25.

>> at
3. The orangutan is along ( = one of) the smartest animals in the world.

>> among
4. She was lying beneath ( = under) the blanket, resting.

>> Correct!
5. The temperature will go down to 10 degrees below zero tonight.

>> Correct!

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