Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to know how others think of me.
It is important because I have to work with many others people.
I don't want to be an outcast.
So I have to act carefuly.
However I sometimes.. it is very tired.
강사 첨삭
I want to know how others think of me.
>> correct!
It is important because I have to work with many others people.
>> It is important because I have to work with other people.
I don\'t want to be an outcast.
>> correct!
So I have to act carefuly.
>> correct! (carefully)
However I sometimes.. it is very tired.
>> However I sometimes _____.
It is very tiring.
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