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2016-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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What is love? This is a hard question for me now..hehe.. I would like to talk about the love beween men and wemen. I think that when someone's face pops automatically and even I just think of him.. my heart would be beating so fast..Lastly, That thinking makes me smile.. Then I realized I felt in love.. I cant pretend with these kind of reactions when I wouldn't fall in love with somebody! 1. The Spanish athlete ran fast than the other runners.(fast) 2. Jim threw the ballfarther than Peter.(far) 3. We answered all the questions better than the other students.(well) 4. Our new teacher explains the exercises worse than our old teacher. (badly) 5. The new mechanic checked the car more thoroughly than the old mechanic. (thoroughly)

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Hi Miss [이름]! I think our reaction when we are in love doesn\'t change, no matter how old we are. It\'s a nice and scary feeling, I think. ^^; I\'ve always been curious about how men act when they are in love. It\'s nice to have someone thst inspires you. ^^ But I think true love (like the love between people married for 50 years) is the best of all. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]! See you! Teacher Anne   What is love? This is a hard question for me now..hehe..>> Correct! I would like to talk about the love beween men and wemen. >> Correct! [women]I think that when someone\'s face pops automatically and even I just think of him.. >> I think that when someone\'s face pops automatically and even when I just think of him,my heart would be beating so fast.. >> Correct! Lastly, That thinking makes me smile.. >> Lastly, that thought would make me smile.Then I realized I felt in love.. >> Correct!I cant pretend with these kind of reactions when I wouldn\'t fall in love with somebody! >> I can\'t pretend with these kinds of reactions when I fall  in love with somebody!1. The Spanish athlete ran fast than the other runners.(fast) >> faster2. Jim threw the ballfarther than Peter.(far) >> Correct! [ball farther]3. We answered all the questions better than the other students.(well) >> Correct!4. Our new teacher explains the exercises worse than our old teacher. (badly) >> Correct!5. The new mechanic checked the car more thoroughly than the old mechanic. (thoroughly) >> Correct!

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