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2016-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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When I was 20's, I used to go somewhere to take new fresh air for making myself feel better when I was stressed out however , as I getting older, I want to stay my room for making me feel better..The reason why, maybe I can be alone in my room.. I don't want to care about anything even myself..Being natural makes me better.. My house is sweet home for me^^ 1. I haven't really studied for this exam,so I feel a little nervous. 2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway. 3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first. 4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes. 5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis.

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Hi Miss [이름]! I have also always loved being alone at home. There is something peaceful about it. ^^ When I was a student, I used to go to the beach to unwind during the summer season. Somehow, it helps. But just like you, I am more comfortable when I stay at home. ^^ Have a peaceful amd happy weekend! Teacher Anne   When I was 20\'s, I used to go somewhere to take new fresh air for making myself feel better when I was stressed out >> When I was in my 20\'s I used to go somewhere to breathe some fresh air to make myself feel better when I was stressed out. however , as I getting older, I want to stay my room for making me feel better.. >> However,as I grew older, I started wanting to stay in my room to make myself feel better. The reason why, maybe I can be alone in my room.. >> The reason is maybe because I can be alone in my room.I don\'t want to care about anything even myself.. >> I don\'t want to care about anything, even about myself. Being natural makes me better.. >> Correct! OR>>Being natural makes me feel better.My house is sweet home for me^^ >> My house is a sweet home for me. ^^1. I haven\'t really studied for this exam,so I feel a little nervous. >> Correct!2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway. >> Correct!3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first. >> unless4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes. >> Correct!5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis. >> Correct!

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