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학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 20's, I used to go somewhere to take new fresh air for making myself feel better when I was stressed out however , as I getting older, I want to stay my room for making me feel better..The reason why, maybe I can be alone in my room..
I don't want to care about anything even myself..Being natural makes me better..
My house is sweet home for me^^
1. I haven't really studied for this exam,so I feel a little
nervous.
2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway.
3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first.
4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes.
5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I have also always loved being alone at home.
There is something peaceful about it. ^^
When I was a student, I used to go to the beach to unwind during the summer season.
Somehow, it helps.
But just like you, I am more comfortable when I stay at home. ^^
Have a peaceful amd happy weekend!
Teacher Anne
When I was 20\'s, I used to go somewhere to take new fresh air for making myself feel better when I was stressed out
>> When I was in my 20\'s I used to go somewhere to breathe some fresh air to make myself feel better when I was stressed out.
however , as I getting older, I want to stay my room for making me feel better..
>> However,as I grew older, I started wanting to stay in my room to make myself feel better.
The reason why, maybe I can be alone in my room..
>> The reason is maybe because I can be alone in my room.I don\'t want to care about anything even myself..
>> I don\'t want to care about anything, even about myself.
Being natural makes me better..
>> Correct!
OR>>Being natural makes me feel better.My house is sweet home for me^^
>> My house is a sweet home for me. ^^1. I haven\'t really studied for this exam,so I feel a little nervous.
>> Correct!2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway.
>> Correct!3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first.
>> unless4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes.
>> Correct!5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis.
>> Correct!
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