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I realized that family is important for me after going abroad.
I didn't know how important family is..
I just want to be with them whenever there are some bad or good situations..
What is important fact is that we are together all the time..
People think that family is the closest people but we don't really treat them as valuable as we do. I don't want to regret with what I have done to my family..
I want to enjoytime with them as much as I can.
1. He gave him the money.
2. She went to him on Friday.
3. I will lend him my book.
4.You should give that shirt to her .
5. You should give her that shirt.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I agree with you!
I don\'t know how or when I realized that family is very important, but somehow,
I came to realize that I shouldn\'t try to get away from them.
Like you, I have learned to appreciate everyone in the family.
Especially now that my siblings have grown and are finding their own paths in life.
It\'s always a sad thing to be the eldest in the family.
I grow more sentimental each day.
Anyway, do enjoy your weekend. ^^
See you soon!
Teacher Anne
I realized that family is important for me after going abroad.
>> Correct!I didn\'t know how important family is..
>> Correct! [was]I just want to be with them whenever there are some bad or good situations..
>> Correct!What is important fact is that we are together all the time..
>> What is important is that we are together all the time.
OR>> The important thing is that we are together all the time.People think that family is the closest people but we don\'t really treat them as valuable as we do.
>> People think that family should be the closest people around but we don\'t treat them with value.
I don\'t want to regret with what I have done to my family..
>> I don\'t want to regret anything I have done to my family.I want to enjoytime with them as much as I can.>> Correct! [enjoy time]1. He gave him the money.
>> Correct!2. She went to him on Friday.
>> Correct!3. I will lend him my book.
>> Correct!4.You should give that shirt to her .
>> Correct!5. You should give her that shirt.
>> Correct!
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