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2016-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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When I was young, I really liked sweets but after 20's, I didn't want them. Some people told me that they want some sweets when they are stressed out.. So whenever I am with them, I have some sweets..but I think I don't really like them.. I don't really have favorite food..It always take turns..what I mean is that nowadays I am into tuckbokki but one month ago, I was into sushi..hehe What about you? 1. James did not want to wake his girlfriend, so he left quietly. 2. I can't understand him. He doesn't speak very clearly . 3. We had a great time in Mexico City. 4. I understood the question, but I couldn't answer very quickly. 5. I don't have a hard time making friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I still like sweets until now. ^^

But I try not to eat too much because I don\'t want to have diabetes (too much sugar).

When I am stressed, I like to eat ice cream.

I guess my favorite food is chocolate. ^^;

I like watching cooking shows. Not that it makes me a better cook, but I am just amazed at how skilled they are at cooking.

Sometimes, I think I could do it too, if the ingredients were not too expensive. Haha! ^^

Do you like watching cooking shows too?

See you later!

Teacher Anne

 

When I was young, I really liked sweets but after 20\'s, I didn\'t want them.

>> When I was young, I really liked sweets after my 20\'s I didn\'t want them.
Some people told me that they want some sweets when they are stressed out..

>> Correct!
So whenever I am with them, I have some sweets..

>> So whenever I am with them, I eat some sweets,

but I think I don\'t really like them..

>> Correct!
I don\'t really have favorite food..It always take turns..what I mean is that

>> I don\'t really have a favorite food. It always takes turns. What  I mean is that,
nowadays I am into tuckbokki but one month ago, I was into sushi..hehe

>> Correct!
What about you?
>> Correct!
1. James did not want to wake his girlfriend, so he left quietly.

>> Correct!
2. I can\'t understand him. He doesn\'t speak very clearly .

>> Correct!
3. We had a great time in Mexico City.

>> Correct!
4. I understood the question, but I couldn\'t answer very quickly.

>> Correct!
5. I don\'t have a hard time making friends.

>> Correct!

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