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2016-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. You must start now, unless you will miss the train. 2. It is very too hot to go out. 3. As being fine weather, we went out for a walk. 4. If It may rain, we get wet. 5. Our team is strong enough to win the match. 6. The students are clever and hard working too. 7. The more read, the more gain knowledge. 8. As suffering from fever, He could not attend the class. 9. The farmers use modern methods of cultivation so that they can wish to get a better harvest. 10. After learnt her lessons, then she went to bed

강사 첨삭

Hello there,Taking time to learn more about grammar could broaden your knowledge.  Give yourself to learn more and give yourself to remember all the things you\'ve learned. Have a nice day at work,[이름]!!! T. Jeny   1. You must start now, unless you will miss the train. >>Unless you start now, you will miss the train.2. It is very too hot to go out. >>correct3. As being fine weather, we went out for a walk.>>The weather being fine, we went out for a walk. / As the weather was fine, we went out for a walk4. If It may rain, we get wet.>>If it rains, we will get wet.5. Our team is strong enough to win the match. >>correct6. The students are clever and hard working too. >>The students are both clever and hard working.7. The more read, the more gain knowledge. >>The more you read, the more knowledge you gain.8. As suffering from fever, He could not attend the class. >>As Tom was suffering from fever, he could not attend the class.9. The farmers use modern methods of cultivation so that they can wish to get a better harvest.>>correct10. After learnt her lessons, then she went to bed >>After learning her lessons, Sita went to bed. / Sita went to bed after she (had) learnt her lessons.

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