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2016-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Are you having a nice weekend? The weather in my city seems to be warmer than before. It's good weather to go out. ^^ What was your favorite TV show growing up? Why? I watch the current affairs TV show 'Seul-Jeon', which means 'war of words', very often these days. Three persons are appeared in that TV show, a host and two debaters. Among two debaters, one debater takes conservative side and the other debater takes progressive side. The reason why I like this TV show is that it explains and analyzes current affairs in easy and entertaining ways. As a student studying politics, I've been helped by this TV show to understand current affairs.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. However, I think you misunderstood the question. ^^ I was asking about the TV show that you liked as a child - probably during your elementary or middle school days. Anyway, thanks for trying your best to answer this question.  Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~   Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Are you having a nice weekend? >> CORRECT! The weather in my city seems to be warmer than before. >> CORRECT! It\'s good weather to go out. ^^ >> It\'s a good weather to go out. I watch the current affairs TV show \'Seul-Jeon\', which means \'war of words\', very often these days. >> CORRECT! Three persons are appeared in that TV show, a host and two debaters. >> There are three people in that TV show, the host and two debaters.Among two debaters, one debater takes conservative side and the other debater takes progressive side. >> Between the two debaters, one would take the conservative side and the other would take the progressive side.The reason why I like this TV show is that it explains and analyzes current affairs in easy and entertaining ways. >> CORRECT! As a student studying politics, I\'ve been helped by this TV show to understand current affairs. >> As a student of politics, this TV show has been helpful for me in understanding current affairs.  

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