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2016-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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We can call the situation dilemma. If I can't get both, I choose a delight job more than to make much money. I think it is more valuable. Money never fill your mind and never make happy. The best thing is to earn proper compensation as we work hard.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],Thank you for your homework!!! Continue doing that!!!I am very happy that you are eager to learn a lot of things and you want to know which field that you need to practice more. It is a good thing and it means that you are interested in learning a lot of things. I commend you for that.T. Jeny We can call the situation dilemma. >>We can call the situation a dilemma.If I can\'t get both, I choose a delight job more than to make much money. >>If I can\'t get both, I will choose delight on my job more than to make much money.I think it is more valuable. >>correctMoney never fill your mind and never make happy. >>Money will never fulfill your mind and will never make you happy.The best thing is to earn proper compensation as we work hard. >>The best thing is to earn a proper compensation as we work hard.

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