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HAPPY MONDAY!!!!! Charlie~! Yes I totally agree that people behave differently depending on what they wear. As for me, I could have the notion of it through having an experience myself and seeing others. Interestingly, I’ve been watching an experiment which was about how clothes was influential to people As a result, a man who wore neat suit in the video behaved more gently and others thought him professional. Next, I could find myself behaving differently when I wore formal dress and shoes in university. As far as I remembered, there was a different person in the mirror. She was very modest. And I went out with a man who wore naval uniform all the time because of his major in the past and he was also a little different when he wore the uniform since he had to have some regulations and sometimes it made me uncomfortable during dating..That’s why I totally agree with this idea.

Happy Monday [이름]! ~~~   Thank you for your well-written essay. ^^ The first sentence was supposed to be correct but you left out the punctuation. Punctuation is always important, you see. I also added the modal verb \"do\" to emphasize that you defintely agree with the idea. ^^ Good job!   See you later!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     Yes I totally agree that people behave differently depending on what they wear. >> Yes, I totally agree that people do behave differently depending on what they wear.   As for me, I could have the notion of it through having an experience myself and seeing others. >> I got this notion through personal experience and observing it in others as well. Interestingly, I’ve been watching an experiment which was about how clothes was influential to people As a result, a man who wore neat suit in the video behaved more gently and others thought him professional. >> Interestingly enough, I watched an experiment on how clothes influence people where a man who wore a neat suit behaved more genteel (or gentlemanly) and the people around him thought he was a professional.   Next, I could find myself behaving differently when I wore formal dress and shoes in university.  As far as I remembered, there was a different person in the mirror. She was very modest. >> Another is when I find myself behaving differently when I wear a formal dress and heels back in university. As far as I can remember, I was seeing someone different in the mirror; someone who was quite modest.    And I went out with a man who wore naval uniform all the time because of his major in the past and he was also a little different when he wore the uniform since he had to have some regulations and sometimes it made me uncomfortable during dating.. >> I also went out with a man who wore a naval uniform all the time because of his major back then and he was a bit different when he wore his uniform because he had to follow some rules and regulations and at times, it made uncomfortable while on a date.   That’s why I totally agree with this idea. >> CORRECT