Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I've got a tons of things to do after meeting my academic advisor yesterday.
I have to not only prepare for my new semester but also rewrite my paper which I will give a presentation on this coming July.
I feel gloomy because my winter break is coming to an end. ㅠ.ㅠ
What is the ideal comfort food for you? Why?
I've loved my grandmother's pollack stew since I was a child.
Frozen pollack was a common ingredient in Korea, and it was very cheap.
My grandparents weren't well-off then, but they wanted to make some special food for me.
She always bought several frozen pollacks to make a pot of pollack stew whenever I visited them.
Her pollack stew was really nice, and I still love her pollack stew.
Fortunately, she can't cook anymore because she is sick these days.
I really hope she could be healthy again, and I could have her nice pollack stew.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I suddenly missed my late grandmother because of your story here. She used to cook delicious home-cooked meals for me and my brothers too.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I\'ve got a tons of things to do after meeting my academic advisor yesterday.
>> I\'ve got tons of things to do after meeting with my academic adviser yesterday.
OR >> I\'ve got a ton of things to do after meeting with my academic adviser yesterday.
I have to not only prepare for my new semester but also rewrite my paper which I will give a presentation on this coming July.
>> Not only do I have to prepare for my new semester, but I also have to rewrite my paper, which I will give a presentation on, this coming July.
I feel gloomy because my winter break is coming to an end. ㅠ.ㅠ
>> CORRECT! I\'ve loved my grandmother\'s pollack stew since I was a child.
>> CORRECT! Frozen pollack was a common ingredient in Korea, and it was very cheap.
>> CORRECT! My grandparents weren\'t well-off then, but they wanted to make some special food for me.>> CORRECT!
She always bought several frozen pollacks to make a pot of pollack stew whenever I visited them.
>> CORRECT! Her pollack stew was really nice, and I still love her pollack stew.
>> Her pollack stew was really nice and I still love it.Fortunately, she can\'t cook anymore because she is sick these days.
>> Unfortunately, she can\'t cook anymore because she\'s been sick these days.I really hope she could be healthy again, and I could have her nice pollack stew.
>> I really hope she could be healthy again so I could have her nice pollack stew.
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