Homework

2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. I've got a tons of things to do after meeting my academic advisor yesterday. I have to not only prepare for my new semester but also rewrite my paper which I will give a presentation on this coming July. I feel gloomy because my winter break is coming to an end. ㅠ.ㅠ What is the ideal comfort food for you? Why? I've loved my grandmother's pollack stew since I was a child. Frozen pollack was a common ingredient in Korea, and it was very cheap. My grandparents weren't well-off then, but they wanted to make some special food for me. She always bought several frozen pollacks to make a pot of pollack stew whenever I visited them. Her pollack stew was really nice, and I still love her pollack stew. Fortunately, she can't cook anymore because she is sick these days. I really hope she could be healthy again, and I could have her nice pollack stew.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I suddenly missed my late grandmother because of your story here.  She used to cook delicious home-cooked meals for me and my brothers too. Thanks for doing your homework. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I\'ve got a tons of things to do after meeting my academic advisor yesterday. >> I\'ve got tons of things to do after meeting with my academic adviser yesterday. OR >> I\'ve got a ton of things to do after meeting with my academic adviser yesterday. I have to not only prepare for my new semester but also rewrite my paper which I will give a presentation on this coming July. >> Not only do I have to prepare for my new semester, but I also have to rewrite my paper, which I will give a presentation on, this coming July. I feel gloomy because my winter break is coming to an end. ㅠ.ㅠ >> CORRECT! I\'ve loved my grandmother\'s pollack stew since I was a child. >> CORRECT! Frozen pollack was a common ingredient in Korea, and it was very cheap. >> CORRECT! My grandparents weren\'t well-off then, but they wanted to make some special food for me.>> CORRECT! She always bought several frozen pollacks to make a pot of pollack stew whenever I visited them. >> CORRECT! Her pollack stew was really nice, and I still love her pollack stew. >> Her pollack stew was really nice and I still love it.Fortunately, she can\'t cook anymore because she is sick these days. >> Unfortunately, she can\'t cook anymore because she\'s been sick these days.I really hope she could be healthy again, and I could have her nice pollack stew. >> I really hope she could be healthy again so I could have her nice pollack stew.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·