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2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! Teacher! Homework doing many time..ㅜㅜhehe But thanks you teacher. I do best! It is good day.^^ Have nice day. score 1. mark with knife without cutting peel 2. take skin off fruit/vegetable dice 3. cut into cubes knead 4. shake powder through a fine mesh/net simmer 5. massage with hands boil 6. cook in hot water grate7. turn heat down to heat slowly chop 8. use implement to cut food into shreds fry 9. cook using hot oil in a pan sieve 10. cut very roughly mix 11. stir ingredients together slice 12. cut into thin slices like paper bake 13. cook in oven without oil roast 14. cook in oven with oil

강사 첨삭

Hi again, my dearest [이름]!  


Yehey!

It\'s homework time for you. kiki 

This is the very first homework that I have given you.

You got nine correct answers out of fourteen. 

Not bad! kiki 

At least you\'ve learned new words which will be used when you are in the kitchen. kiki 


Thank you for doing your best and for taking the time to do your homework.

I think you spent time doing these.
I really appreciate it and I want to commend you for your diligence in learning.
 


We don\'t have class tonight so I will see you tomorrow.

Take care!

~~~T. Heidi __^-^__


Hi! Teacher!

>>> Hi teacher!
 Homework doing many time..ㅜㅜhehe

>>> It\'s my time to do many of my homework. T.T hehe
 But thanks you teacher.

>>> Thanks to you teacher.

OR: 

>>> But I want to say thank you teacher.
 I do best!

>>> I will do my best.
 It is good day.^^

>>> It\'s a good day.^^

>>> (You only missed the article \'a\'.)
 Have nice day.

>>> Have a nice day.

>>> (You only missed the article \'a\'.)

 score 1. mark with knife without cutting

>>> Correct!
 peel 2. take skin off fruit/vegetable

>>> Correct!
 dice 3. cut into cubes

>>> Correct!
 knead 4. shake powder through a fine mesh/net

>>> Sieve
 simmer 5. massage with hands

>>> Knead
 boil 6. cook in hot water

>>> Correct!
 grate7. turn heat down to heat slowly

>>> Simmer
 chop 8. use implement to cut food into shreds

>>> Grate
 fry 9. cook using hot oil in a pan

>>> Correct!
 sieve 10. cut very roughly

>>> Chop
 mix 11. stir ingredients together

>>> Correct!
 slice 12. cut into thin slices like paper

>>> Correct!
 bake 13. cook in oven without oil

>>> Correct!
 roast 14. cook in oven with oil

>>> Correct!


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