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2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Hello sophia, i'm amanda. How are you today? I try to do my best with my homework. But my homework is very difficult. please give me easy homework to me. Thank you. Have a good day teacher~~~~ 1. The farmer lit (light) the fire at 6 P.M. and it burnt (burn) brightly when we visited(visit) him at 7 P.M. 2. Mother baked (bake) a cake when the light went (go) out. She had to finish it in the dark. 3. We didn't want to talk to Paul, so when he entered (enter) the room, we left (leave). 4. He had (have) a shower when the telephone rung (ring). Unwillingly, he got (get) out of the bathroom and went (go) to answer it. 5. David was very courteous. Whenever someone entered (enter) the office, he stood(stand) up.

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Hello Amanda, I am sorry to hear that the homework is too difficult for you. I will try to give you easier ones next time. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework even though it\'s hard for you. I\'m happy that you tried your best. Teacher Sophia   Here are your corrections: 1. The farmer lit (light) the fire at 6 P.M. and it burnt (burn) brightly when we visited(visit) him at 7 P.M.>> The farmer lit the fire at 6 P.M. and it was burning brightly when we visited him at 7 P.M.  2. Mother baked (bake) a cake when the light went (go) out. She had to finish it in the dark.>> Mother was baking a cake when the light went out. She had to finish it in the dark. 3. We didn\'t want to talk to Paul, so when he entered (enter) the room, we left (leave).>> CORRECT 4. He had (have) a shower when the telephone rung (ring). Unwillingly, he got (get) out of the bathroom and went (go) to answer it.>> He was having a shower when the telephone rang. Unwillingly, he got out of the bathroom and went to answer it. 5. David was very courteous. Whenever someone entered (enter) the office, he stood(stand) up. >> CORRECT  

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