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2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Hello sohia. I read my homework, but I don't know about grammer. I'm sorry. This homework is very difficult to me. So, I write about my today. Thank you. I wake up 9'o clock, I take care of my nephew. I have lunch 12'o clock, my lunch menu is eggs. I have plan to meet my feiend. so I take a shower. Then I go out my home. I come back 8'o clock. I spend time with my family. Then I sleep. This is my today. How about you sophia? kkk

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Hello Amanda, It\'s okay if you can\'t answer the homework at least you tried your best to do it. Thank you for exerting your effort to tell me about your day. Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: Hello sohia. >> Hello Sophia,I read my homework, but I don\'t know about grammer. >> I saw my homework but I don\'t have any idea about grammar.I\'m sorry. This homework is very difficult to me. >> I\'m sorry because I find it difficult for me.So, I write about my today. Thank you. >> So, I wrote about my typical day. I wake up 9\'o clock, I take care of my nephew. >> I wake up at 9 o\'clock in the morning. I take care of my nephew.I have lunch 12\'o clock, my lunch menu is eggs. >> I have my lunch at 12 o\'clock in the afternoon. I ate eggs for lunch.I have plan to meet my feiend. so I take a shower. >> I took a shower because I\'m planning to meet my friend.Then I go out my home. >> I went out to meet my friend.I come back 8\'o clock. >> I went back at 8 o\'clock in the evening.I spend time with my family. Then I sleep. >> I spent time with my family before I went to bed.This is my today. >> This is what I did for the whole day.How about you sophia? kkk >> How was your day?  

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