HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello sophia.
I'm not good at grammar. I'm studying grammar.
please, wait for me. Thank you teaching for me.
I'm write about my hobby.
My hobby is watching movie.
because, I focus on movie. So, I don't think about other things.
I'm relaxed.
My favorite genre is animation.
I don't like melodrama.
Recently, I watched "Good dinosaur"
I'm touched and sad.
Try to watch "Good dinosaur" you will like it.
Thank you sophia.
강사 첨삭
Hello Amanda,
It\'s okay if you can\'t answer the homework that I\'m giving you.
I can understand that grammar is really difficult.
I\'m happy that you tried.
I\'m happy that you told me about your hobbies.
I like watching movies too.
I think, we can hang out together.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Hello sophia.
>> Hello Sophia,I\'m not good at grammar. I\'m studying grammar.
>> I\'m not good at grammar so I\'m studying grammar now.please, wait for me. Thank you teaching for me.
>> Please wait for me to understand grammar and thank you for teaching me.I\'m write about my hobby.
>> I\'ll write about my hobby.My hobby is watching movie. because, I focus on movie. So, I don\'t think about other things.
>> I like watching movies. I focus on watching so I don\'t want to be disturbed by other things.I\'m relaxed.
>> I feel relaxed.My favorite genre is animation.
>> I like watching animations.I don\'t like melodrama.
>> I don\'t like watching melodrama.Recently, I watched \"Good dinosaur\"
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I watched \"Good dinosaur\" recently.I\'m touched and sad.
>> I\'m touched and felt sad.Try to watch \"Good dinosaur\" you will like it.
>> I recommend you to watch the movie. I know, you will like it.Thank you sophia.
>> Thank you Sophia
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