Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Below is my answer about the writing question on Monday.
Instead of the writing question for today, I will answer the former.
Answer the following question in not less than 5 sentences.
In your opinion, which holiday has lost its true meaning? Why?
June 6 is the Memorial Day in Korea.
During the Japanese colonial period and Korean War, lots of ancestors who were loyal and patriotic gave their lives for our country.
However, as time went by, most young people think that day as just a holiday which they can be out of work.
Korea has been surrounded by the superpowers such as China, Japan and Russia.
We never would have enjoyed peace and affluence in our times if they didn't sacrifice their lives for our country.
Nevertheless, it is true that young people couldn't recall the past easily which they haven't experienced before.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thank you for taking some time to do your homework. Your answer is definitely spot on.
Holidays like these are often not remembered properly in my country too. It\'s a sad reality.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!Below is my answer about the writing question on Monday.>> Below is my answer to the essay question on Monday.Instead of the writing question for today, I will answer the former.>> Instead of the essay question for today, I will answer the former.
June 6 is the Memorial Day in Korea.>> CORRECT!
During the Japanese colonial period and Korean War, lots of ancestors who were loyal and patriotic gave their lives for our country.>> CORRECT!
However, as time went by, most young people think that day as just a holiday which they can be out of work.>> However, as time went by, most young people think of that day as just a holiday when they can take a break from work.Korea has been surrounded by the superpowers such as China, Japan and Russia.
>> Korea is surrounded by powerful nations like China, Japan and Russia.We never would have enjoyed peace and affluence in our times if they didn\'t sacrifice their lives for our country.
>> CORRECT!Nevertheless, it is true that young people couldn\'t recall the past easily which they haven\'t experienced before.
>> Nevertheless, it is true that young people don\'t remember history that well because they did not experience it.
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