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2016-02-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. This weekend is the last weekend of my winter break. Having a break twice a year is one of privilege which students can enjoy. However, my privilege is coming to an end. T.T What is something most people do not know about you? Explain in detail. Most people don't know that I liked to argue over something when I was younger than now. In those days, I thought that I should argue over it whenever I discover something which was different with what I've learned from school. I valued principles as being very important. In other words, I guess I had a red-type mind then. However, abundant experiences after that made me have flexible thinking. Therefore, I am not argumentative any more.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I hope you made the most out of your remaining vacation days. Thank you for doing your homework. Check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! This weekend is the last weekend of my winter break. >> CORRECT! Having a break twice a year is one of privilege which students can enjoy. >> Having a break twice a year is one of the privileges that students can enjoy. However, my privilege is coming to an end. T.T >> CORRECT! Most people don\'t know that I liked to argue over something when I was younger than now. >> Most people don\'t know that I liked to argue over something when I was younger. In those days, I thought that I should argue over it whenever I discover something which was different with what I\'ve learned from school. >> In those days, I thought that I should question something which was different from what I\'ve learned in school. I valued principles as being very important. >> CORRECT! In other words, I guess I had a red-type mind then. >> CORRECT! However, abundant experiences after that made me have flexible thinking. >> However, the abundant experiences that I\'ve gained afterwards made me become more flexible. Therefore, I am not argumentative anymore. >> CORRECT!  

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