homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!!!
Thank you for your homework I believe that if you put your heart into one thing, you could see yourself being successful in all aspect of your life. I know you\'ll be successful in speaking the language well. Have a great time!!!
T. Jeny
I always want to live nicely.
>>correct
But It is difficult to live nice.
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It\'s hard to be a nice person and difficult to pretend to be a nice person.
>>It\'s hard to be a nice person and it\'s also difficult to pretend to be a nice person.
To imagine furture dream is very good.
>>It is good to imagine my future.
But furture is hide behind adversity, sorrow, worry.
>>But the future hides behind adversity, sorrow, worry.
The only thing that I do live my normal life with patience.
>>I will only live a normal life with having patience.
My future is not to fed up my daily life anyway on today.
>>With the way I live my live now will determine my future.
But it is possible to change every moment.
>>Changes are possible every moment.
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