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2016-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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When I call the person as my best friend, I feel pleased to give everything I have to her or him. I could also say that my best friend also have the same feelings on me.. All my best friends have many good personalities and good talents.. I really learn many things from them... 1.John really wanted to go on a date with Victoria, so he asked her out. 2.The old factory burned down last week. 3.I will always be your friend. You can count on me. 4.If you make a mistake, cross out the wrong answer and write the correct one. 5.I'll drop off your CDs on the way to my girlfriend's house.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Your answer reminded me of the book called. \"The 5 Love Languages\".

I think the way you express your love is by giving gifts.

Your friends are lucky to have you and you have chosen your friends well. ^^;

Some people are not so lucky. They say making friends is hard.

Do you think it is really hard to find a true friend these days?

Thanks for doing your best everyday!

Stay positive!

Teacher Anne

 

When I call the person as my best friend,

>> Correct!

I feel pleased to give everything I have to her or him.

>> Correct!

I could also say that my best friend also have the same feelings on me..

>> Correct!
All my best friends have many good personalities and good talents..

>> Correct!

I really learn many things from them...

>> Correct!
1.John really wanted to go on a date with Victoria, so he asked her out.

>> Correct!
2.The old factory burned down last week.

>> Correct!
3.I will always be your friend. You can count on me.

>> Correct!
4.If you make a mistake, cross out the wrong answer and write the correct one.

>> Correct!
5.I\'ll drop off your CD\'s on the way to my girlfriend\'s house.

>> Correct!

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