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2016-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Today is the beginning day of school. I'm going to take two classes this semester on Tuesday and Wednesday. It's time to study now.^^ What traditional gender roles do you disagree with? Why? Actually, I don't care for cooking and preparing a meal. However, most people take it for granted that women cook and prepare a meal. In the past, a lot of women didn't have their own jon and earn money. I admit that it is fair for women to cook and prepare a meal then. Now, things have changed a lot. Most women have their own job and earn money for their family. So, I think the traditional idea that women should cook and prepare a meal should be thrown. It's absolutely behind the times.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thank you for doing your homework. I totally agree with what you said here.  It\'s the 21st century, but gender equality is still making a lot of noise. I think traditional gender roles should be a thing of the past. Enjoy your first day back to school! Ciao! ~TEACHER MARIE~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Today is the beginning day of school. >> Today is the start of school.I\'m going to take two classes this semester on Tuesday and Wednesday. >> I\'m going to take two classes this semester, every Tuesdays and Wednesdays.It\'s time to study now.^^ >> CORRECT!Actually, I don\'t care for cooking and preparing a meal. >> Actually, I don\'t care much for cooking and preparing meals.However, most people take it for granted that women cook and prepare meals. >> CORRECT!In the past, a lot of women didn\'t have their own jon and earn money. >> In the past, a lot of women didn\'t have their own jobs and couldn\'t earn money. I admit that it is fair for women to cook and prepare a meal then. >> I admit that it is fair for women to cook and prepare meals back then.Now, things have changed a lot. >> CORRECT!Most women have their own jobs and earn money for their family. >> CORRECT!So, I think the traditional idea that women should cook and prepare a meal should be thrown. >> So, I think the traditional idea that women should cook and prepare meals should be disregarded. It\'s absolutely behind the times. >> CORRECT!

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