Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Today is the beginning day of school.
I'm going to take two classes this semester on Tuesday and Wednesday.
It's time to study now.^^
What traditional gender roles do you disagree with? Why?
Actually, I don't care for cooking and preparing a meal.
However, most people take it for granted that women cook and prepare a meal.
In the past, a lot of women didn't have their own jon and earn money.
I admit that it is fair for women to cook and prepare a meal then.
Now, things have changed a lot.
Most women have their own job and earn money for their family.
So, I think the traditional idea that women should cook and prepare a meal should be thrown.
It's absolutely behind the times.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thank you for doing your homework. I totally agree with what you said here.
It\'s the 21st century, but gender equality is still making a lot of noise. I think traditional gender roles should be a thing of the past.
Enjoy your first day back to school!
Ciao!
~TEACHER MARIE~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!Today is the beginning day of school.
>> Today is the start of school.I\'m going to take two classes this semester on Tuesday and Wednesday.
>> I\'m going to take two classes this semester, every Tuesdays and Wednesdays.It\'s time to study now.^^
>> CORRECT!Actually, I don\'t care for cooking and preparing a meal.
>> Actually, I don\'t care much for cooking and preparing meals.However, most people take it for granted that women cook and prepare meals.
>> CORRECT!In the past, a lot of women didn\'t have their own jon and earn money.
>> In the past, a lot of women didn\'t have their own jobs and couldn\'t earn money.
I admit that it is fair for women to cook and prepare a meal then.
>> I admit that it is fair for women to cook and prepare meals back then.Now, things have changed a lot.
>> CORRECT!Most women have their own jobs and earn money for their family.
>> CORRECT!So, I think the traditional idea that women should cook and prepare a meal should be thrown.
>> So, I think the traditional idea that women should cook and prepare meals should be disregarded.
It\'s absolutely behind the times.
>> CORRECT!
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