Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I guess it's getting warm.
Spring is not that far.
How do you think the typical Korean family will change over the next 25 years?
I think nuclear family would be more common within the next 25 years.
The increase of nuclear families would be resulted in the decrease or extinction of the title of family member and relative such as aunt and uncle.
Unlike English, Korean language has subdivided titles of family member and relative.
However, as the type of family gets simple, many people don't have an opportunity to call some titles of family member and relative.
In my son's case, he doesn't have an 'imo' who means one's mother's sister, so he hasn't called 'imo' yet.
In conclusion, nuclear family would be a general trend after 25 years, and this would affect our use of language toward decreasing or eliminating some titles of family member and relative.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Wow. It looks like you have given this homework plenty of thought. I\'m impressed. Great job!
Keep up the good work.
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I guess it\'s getting warm.
>> CORRECT! Spring is not that far.
>> CORRECT! I think nuclear family would be more common within the next 25 years.
>> CORRECT! The increase of nuclear families would be resulted in the decrease or extinction of the title of family member and relative such as aunt and uncle.
>> The increase of nuclear families would result from the decrease or extinction of some titles of family members and relatives, such as aunt and uncle.
Unlike English, Korean language has subdivided titles of family members and relatives.
>> CORRECT! However, as the type of family gets simple, many people don\'t have an opportunity to call some titles of family member and relative.
>> However, as the type of family gets smaller, many people don\'t have an opportunity to use some titles of family members and relatives.
In my son\'s case, he doesn\'t have an \'imo\' who means one\'s mother\'s sister, so he hasn\'t called \'imo\' yet.
>> In my son\'s case, he doesn\'t have an \'imo\', which means one\'s mother\'s sister, so he hasn\'t called anyone \'imo\' yet.
In conclusion, nuclear family would be a general trend after 25 years, and this would affect our use of language toward decreasing or eliminating some titles of family members and relatives.
>> CORRECT!
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