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Hi Miss [이름]!
I honestly feel sad whenever I remember that I have grown old.
But I try my best to think positively.
On the bright side, I\'ve made it this far.
I\'ve known some who didn\'t make it past their 20\'s.
Even my country is having a problem with the aged population since they don\'t get enough benefits.
Like you, I am also hoping that our countries will find a way to support them. ^^;
Enjoy your weekend, Miss [이름]!
Teacher Anne
I don\'t really get the question..
>> Correct!
but as my understanding, there are some bad things as we grow old..is that right?
>> but as to my understanding, there are some bad things that happen as we grow old. Is that right?
Nobody likes to be grow old..Our body and mental condition will be weak and bad..
>> Correct!
especially, the government is still developing the wellfare for elderies...
>> Most especially since the government is still developing welfare programs for the elderly.
I am not that old for now
>> Correct!
but someday I will be the partof eldery
>> but someday, I will be a part of the aged population.
we need to know this fact and need to support elderies.
>> Correct! [We]; [elderly]
1. Things are busier now than they used to be.
>> Correct!
2. He is more nervous about this than I am.
>> Correct!
3. I liked this movie, although I found it a bit duller than his last film.
>> Correct!
4. Mary wears her white skirt more often than (she wears) her blue one.
>> Correct!
5. This test is more simple than the last one.
>> Correct!
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