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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Are you having a good time? It has been raining in my city. It must be spring rain. See you tomorrow. What food did you used to like but now hate? Why? In order to answer for this essay question, I spent a lot of time thinking about that. However, I guess I haven't experienced that. I have a lot of food I didn't used to like but now like as opposed to the essay question. I was a picky eater when I was young. I didn't used to have unattractive food such as pork back-bone stew and Korean sausage. As time went by, I get to like them and often enjoy those food. Unfortunately, my son is a picky eater, too. I expect that he would like those food soon.

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Hi Kaylee! Thank you for still trying your best to answer the essay question. There is a vegetable called \"bitter gourd\". I used to hate it because, well, it is bitter. ^^ But they said that it is good for people with anemia, like me. That\'s why I started eating it and I kind of liked it. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Are you having a good time? >> CORRECT!It has been raining in my city. >> CORRECT!It must be spring rain. >> CORRECT!See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT!In order to answer for this essay question, I spent a lot of time thinking about that. >> In order to answer this essay question, I spent a lot of time thinking.However, I guess I haven\'t experienced that. >> CORRECT!I have a lot of food I didn\'t used to like but now like as opposed to the essay question. >> There are a lot of food that I didn\'t used to like, but I like them now, which is the opposite answer to this essay question.I was a picky eater when I was young. >> CORRECT!I didn\'t used to have unattractive food such as pork back-bone stew and Korean sausage. >> I didn\'t eat unappealing food, such as pork backbone stew and Korean sausage. As time went by, I get to like them and often enjoy those food. >> As time went by, I started to like and enjoy them.Unfortunately, my son is a picky eater, too. >> CORRECT!I expect that he would like those food soon. >> CORRECT! OR >> I expect him to like those food soon.

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