Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
My husband called me and told me that he arrived in Busan well.
He said that he's going to come to Seoul by train tomorrow evening.
I am really stocked.^^
What was the biggest perk of any job you've had?
I had worked in overseas marketing department several years ago.
I have gone on a business trip to several foreign countries such as Indonesia, and Russia.
Thanks to the business trips, I've been to several countries and experienced foreign culture.
In addition, I accumulated a lot of flyer miles and became a VIP customer at Korean Air.
I still enjoy a lot of airline's benefits even after quitting my job such as priority check-in service and use of the airline's lounge.
Working in overseas business department was really attractive due to various reason as above.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Your previous job sounds awesome! I would love to have a job with the same perks.
You already know by now how much I love traveling, right?
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!My husband called me and told me that he arrived in Busan well.
>> My husband called me and told me that he arrived safely in Busan.
He said that he\'s going to come to Seoul by train tomorrow evening.
>> CORRECT!I am really stocked.^^
>> I am really stoked.I had worked in overseas marketing department several years ago.
>> I had worked in the overseas marketing department several years ago.
I have gone on a business trip to several foreign countries such as Indonesia, and Russia.
>> I have gone on business trips to several foreign countries, such as Indonesia and Russia.
Thanks to the business trips, I\'ve been to several countries and experienced foreign culture.
>> CORRECT!In addition, I accumulated a lot of flyer miles and became a VIP customer at Korean Air.
>> CORRECT!I still enjoy a lot of airline\'s benefits even after quitting my job such as priority check-in service and use of the airline\'s lounge.
>> I still enjoy a lot of the airline\'s benefits even after quitting my job, such as priority check-in service and use of the airline\'s lounge.
Working in overseas business department was really attractive due to various reason as above.
>> Working in the overseas business department was really attractive due to the reasons stated above.
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