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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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If I were born again, I would be a wind.. Every body can't see me but feel me..I could also be free.. I can go wherever I want...^^ That would be a good experience.. 1. He began to get very angry. (to begin) 2. I broke my glasses when I fell. (to break) 3. Those kids have broken five windows playing baseball. (to break) 4. I have begun studying French. (to begin) 5. He told me that he had done all the work himself. (to do)

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Thank you for giving such a creative answer. ^^

The wind is a mysterious element.

It can be felt but not be seen.

We can only realize that the wind is present when we see leaves dancing or when it brushes against our skin.

It\'s beautiful and powerful at the same time. ^^

Stay awesome, Miss [이름]!

See you!

Teacher Anne

If I were born again, I would be a wind..

>> Correct!
Every body can\'t see me but feel me..I could also be free..

>> Correct! [everybody]

I can go wherever I want...^^

>> Correct!
That would be a good experience..
>> Correct!
1. He began to get very angry. (to begin)
>> Correct!
2. I broke my glasses when I fell. (to break)
>> Correct!
3. Those kids have broken five windows playing baseball. (to break)
>> Correct!
4. I have begun studying French. (to begin)
>> Correct!
5. He told me that he had done all the work himself. (to do)

>> Correct!

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