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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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This is the greatest talent. Sometimes I am curious about other people's live.. How do they spend their time..or what do they do when they are in trouble... I want to see ans know about this..Of course, I can do something crazy but..I shouldn't... 1. There are 10 houses on our street. Our house is the biggest one. 2. My brother sings better than I do, but I play guitar better than he does. 3. This is the best song I have ever heard! 4. Tom is stronger than I am. 5. Out of all the students in our class, I am the strongest.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Invisibility is indeed a great power.

Imagine the possibilities. ^^

It would both be awesome and dangerous. ^^

We all have crazy things we wish to do, but we\'d rather not. ^^

It\'s nice to imagine things like this, but maybe in the future, it won\'t be impossible anymore. ^^;

Have nice day ahead!

Teacher Anne

 

This is the greatest talent.

>> Correct!

Sometimes I am curious about other people\'s live..

>> Correct! [lives]

How do they spend their time..or what do they do when they are in trouble...

>> How do they spend their time? or What do they do when they are in trouble?
I want to see ans know about this..

>> Correct! [and]

Of course, I can do something crazy but..I shouldn\'t...
>> Correct!
1. There are 10 houses on our street. Our house is the biggest one.
>> Correct!

2. My brother sings better than I do, but I play guitar better than he does.

>> Correct!
3. This is the best song I have ever heard!

>> Correct!
4. Tom is stronger than I am.

>> Correct!
5. Out of all the students in our class, I am the strongest.

>> Correct!

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