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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Thanks so much!! After we talk, Ive filled with full energe and confidence..hehe I will try to do my best and don't think about other things.. Right! Actually every time I do something, I am not reaally sure about the results. That is why, it makes me scared..The biggest thing I have had is being a teacher.. I didn't know that I should teach children after I graduated..I know it sounds stupid..I will explain more in our class...^^; I went to the airport at 6:00 AM yesterday. I had to catch the flight to Paris. The lines at the airport were very long, so I had to wait a long time. Once the plane took off, I tried to get some s[이름]p but I couldn't. Then I ate a pretty good meal, a rare occurrence on airplanes! Later, I spoke to one of the flight attendants for a while. She was pretty. She told me that a pilot of the airplane was French. I managed to fall as[이름]p for about an hour. After I woke up, I felt refreshed. I ordered a drink, then another. Generally, it was a pretty smooth flig

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Choosing a career is really a big risk.

But I think you did well in living up with your choice.

As I said, you are excellent in your profession.

Only a few people could do what you are doing right now. ^^

Do you have plans to change your career in the future?

I\'d love to hear more about how you made a choice with your career tomorrow. ^^;

Good luck for today!

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

Thanks so much!! After we talk, Ive filled with full energe and confidence..hehe

>> Thanks so much! After we talked, I was filled with energy and confidence. Hehe.
I will try to do my best and don\'t think about other things..
>> Correct!
Right! Actually every time I do something, I am not reaally sure about the results.

>> Correct! [really]
That is why, it makes me scared..The biggest thing I have had is being a teacher..

>> Correct!
I didn\'t know that I should teach children after I graduated..

>> I didn\'t know that I would be teaching children after I graduated.

I know it sounds stupid..I will explain more in our class...^^;
>> Correct!
I went to the airport at 6:00 AM yesterday.

>> Correct!

I had to catch the flight to Paris. The lines at the airport were very long, so I had to wait a long time.

>> Correct!

Once the plane took off, I tried to get some s[이름]p but I couldn\'t. Then I ate a pretty good meal, a rare occurrence on airplanes!

>> Correct!

Later, I spoke to one of the flight attendants for a while. She was pretty.

>> Correct!

She told me that a pilot of the airplane was French.

>> the

I managed to fall as[이름]p for about an hour.

>> Correct!

After I woke up, I felt refreshed. I ordered a drink, then another.

>> Correct!

Generally, it was a pretty smooth flig

>> Correct! [flight] 

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