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Have you ever met someone who was rude to you and didn’t hold you with much regard? How did you feel? Did you feel annoyed? Peeved?

If you are a self respecting individual, chances are you want others to treat you with respect. And you know what, age isn’t a prerequisite nor is it a magic key to gaining respect. I’ve seen plenty of people who are young be highly respected from their elders.

I’ve also come across older people who I’d never respect because their actions are so out of line. It’s about how you conduct yourself, your attitudes towards others and your actions.

Regardless of whether you are a teenager, a student, a new member in your team/company, or someone starting out in the industry, you can be well respected by others.

Nearly anything will earn you respect in the eyes of someone. But only certain things will earn you respect in the eyes of those who are respected. It’s that simple.

So, true respect is not earned of injuring oneself or breaking the law. The respect earned by that is not true and lasting, because it must be reaffirmed. It is so important for some to be respected that they would to that and more. However, the way to earn respect is to be respectful. Make it an attitude, not a thing given to a person after they have proven themselves.

To me, respect means that you listen to someone’s ideas, follow rules that have been established, as well as know when to help someone, or ask them if they need help. Respect is not just to a person, it can be just something in general. Real Respect is an attitude. True Respect, real Respect is selfless, because you must give of yourself to respect.
Teacher Sophia

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Hi! Sophia^^

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I hope we are making a good class. This is a my first homework.

>> I am hoping to have a good class with you. This is my first homework in your class.
Gaining Respect from others is difficult. Because It is not my part. I can only control my life and thinking.

>> Gaining respect from others is difficult because it\'s difficult to control people\'s mind and attitude.
When we are just live ourselves rightly helping others without any pay, we can get respect or not.

>> When we live rightfully by helping others, it\'s not an assurance that we can gain respect from people.
If we ask someone giving me a respect, no one respect to me.

>> No one will respect us if we ask it from them.
It\'s not a part of word. If you get a respect, throw away selfish mind to support others not to calculate something to get.

>> If you want to gain respect, you should disregard our selfish motives.
Although we do that, I can\'t sure that we get respect from others.

>> On the other hand, it\'s not also an assurance that we gain respect if we disregard selfish motives.
There is something to do without any notice. Respect is also belong to that part.

>> Respect can\'t be gain overnight.