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If people move to another country I would prefer to follow the customs of the new country. There are two reasons that I prefer it. First, it might be hard to live in another country as an immigrant. People will face many differences of culture from eating to rules. To be quick to adapt, I think they should follow the new things as soon as possible. Then they will be confident to live in new country. Next, I believe that it will make another culture between two customs. Through getting settled, they might undergo trial and error and they would find better thing to be more peaceful. Even though they move to another country it will make a new custom as a mixture of them if they keep their own culture in life. In short, trying to adjust new customs with keeping own culture will be good for immigrants.

Hello there [이름]! ^^   Wouldn\'t you know it! You have really improved in your essay writing. ^^ Now your essay was written quite well although notice that the forewording sentence is longer as compared to the supporting sentences. This is so because most of the time, readers only care about the first sentence (whether it is interesting or not). There is another writing style that opposes this rule but we\'ll talk about it some other time. ~~~ You did a very fine job indeed.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==       If people move to another country I would prefer to follow the customs of the new country. >> When people should move or migrate to another country, I think it would be better for them if they follow the customs of their new country rather than keeping their own.   There are two reasons that I prefer it. >> There are two reasons why I think this is so;   First, it might be hard to live in another country as an immigrant. People will face many differences of culture from eating to rules. To be quick to adapt, I think they should follow the new things as soon as possible. Then they will be confident to live in new country. >> First, immigrants face difficulties living in another country especially in culture etiquette so to adapt quickly to this difference, I think they should follow new customs for them to be confident living in a new country.   Next, I believe that it will make another culture between two customs. Through getting settled, they might undergo trial and error and they would find better thing to be more peaceful.Even though they move to another country it will make a new custom as a mixture of them if they keep their own culture in life. In short, trying to adjust new customs with keeping own culture will be good for immigrants. >> Secondly, in adapting new customs while keeping old ones, I believe it will create a new culture which will help immigrants in settling more comfortably while adapting to a new environment. This could be attained through trial and error wherein immigrants get accustomed to new ways while still keeping their own culture.