Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
My husband came to Korea in order to guide some Malaysian emplyee's incentive tour.
They are excellent sales persons in Malaysia branch.
I heard that the company is going to held an welcome party for them.
So, He has to stay there until late night.
My son and I are really sorry because we can't see him although he is in Seoul.
However, his work should be the first since he has a responsibility to protect and manage them.
Do you believe everything happens for a reason? Why?
I kind of believe everything happens for a reason.
I think, however, human beings couldn't know all exact reasons about all situations.
That's why human beings have studied science until now.
Compared to natural science, it is not easy to find the reason in the field of social science because it deals with things about human beings.
Unlike subjects, the experiments with human beings couldn't be easily controlled.
In other words, everything happens for a reason, but we can't know all the reasons.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Too bad you and your son cannot meet your husband during his stay in Seoul.
Anyway, I\'m sure he could spend some time with you once his work is done.
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!My husband came to Korea in order to guide some Malaysian emplyee\'s incentive tour.
>> My husband came to Korea in order to guide some Malaysian employees on their incentive tour.
They are excellent sales persons in Malaysia branch.
>> They are excellent sales people in the Malaysian branch.I heard that the company is going to held an welcome party for them.
>> I heard that the company is going to hold a welcome party for them.So, He has to stay there until late night.
>> So he has to stay there until late at night.My son and I are really sorry because we can\'t see him although he is in Seoul.
>> CORRECT!However, his work should be the first since he has a responsibility to protect and manage them.
>> However, his work should come first since he has a responsibility to protect and guide those Malaysians.I kind of believe everything happens for a reason.
>> CORRECT!I think, however, human beings couldn\'t know all exact reasons about all situations.
>> However, I think that human beings wouldn\'t know all the exact reasons for every situation.That\'s why human beings have studied science until now.
>> CORRECT!
*Capitalize: ScienceCompared to natural science, it is not easy to find the reason in the field of social science because it deals with things about human beings.
>> CORRECT!
*Capitalize: Natural Science, Social ScienceUnlike subjects, the experiments with human beings couldn\'t be easily controlled.
>> Unlike other subjects, the experiments with human beings couldn\'t be easily controlled.In other words, everything happens for a reason, but we can\'t know all the reasons.
>> CORRECT!
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