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2016-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Q. If you see someone with a lot of tattoos what do you think of them. A. I envy them because I can't do that. My office don't want to do tattoos their empoyees.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]! ^^
Thank you very much for doing your homework.

It was quite short though.

I would like to ask you a lot of things.

First of all, why do you want to have tattoos? And why won\'t your office allow it? ^^

Anyway, I think tattoos are beautiful. 

Tattoos are a form of art and it is a way of self expression. 

I hope you are having a great day at work.

See you! ^^

T.LYNN

I envy them because I can\'t do that.
>> CORRECT!

OR >> I am envious of people who have tattoos because I can\'t have one.

My office don\'t want to do tattoos their empoyees.

>> My office doesn\'t want its employees to have tattoos.

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