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In my opinion, when we were childhood, we learned a lot of things.
We have to teach about LOVE.
I think that they who get love can love and teach love.
If they can't get love, they can't be happy.
Also most people think about their future.
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In my opinion, when we were childhood, we learned a lot of things.
>>In my opinion, when we were children, we learned a lot of things.
We have to teach about LOVE.
>>We have to learn about Love.
I think that they who get love can love and teach love.
>>I think that people who get love can love and teach about love in return.
If they can\'t get love, they can\'t be happy.
>>correct
Also most people think about their future.
>>Also most people think about their future.
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