homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today.
I appreciate it very much.
I don\'t think you\'re lazy.
In fact, I think you are a very diligent person because you work, study and do household chores all at the same time!
You have just gone busy that\'s why you were not able to make your homework.
And that\'s totally fine. :)
Don\'t worry about me.
For as long as you attend our classes and continue practicing English, it\'s okay. ^^
I hope you are having a great day.
I\'ll see you in our next classes. ^^
T.LYNN
I am sorry.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I apologize.
These days I was very busy.
>> These days, I am very busy.
OR >> I am very busy these days.
Maybe I am lazy woman.
>> Maybe I am a lazy woman.
I didn\'t do my homework.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I was not able to do my homework.
I have a lot of house chores.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My chores at home are piled up.
I don\'t have my free time as homework in my house.
>> I don\'t have my free time to do my homework at home.
So I used to do my homework in lunch time in my office.
>> I used to do my homework at lunch time in my office.
OR >> I used to do my homework during lunch time in my office.
However these days I had to work in lunch time.
>> However, these days, I also have to work at lunch time.
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