Homework

Hello, teacher. As I told you before, it's so cold today. I took out winter clothes again, and I'm wearing a thick coat now. I'm afraid that Malaysian employees feel cold. How can you make a difference in your community? Among several communities I belong to now, I will mention our local community in my apartment. Making our local community better to live is very important. It's because local community could play a key role to provide comfortable surrounding for their people which the state can't provide. One of our community differences from others is people's voluntary service for their community people. Our community is providing study rooms for students free of charge, many community people are volunteering to keep the place free of charge. I guess this is possible that they think our community people as like family members.

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Kindly check my corrections below. Keep yourself warm! Take care! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!As I told you before, it\'s so cold today. >> CORRECT!I took out winter clothes again, and I\'m wearing a thick coat now. >> CORRECT!I\'m afraid that Malaysian employees feel cold. >> I\'m worried that the Malaysian employees would feel cold.Among several communities I belong to now, I will mention our local community in my apartment. >> Among the several communities that I belong to now, I would like to talk about our local community in my apartment.Making our local community better to live is very important.>> Making our local community a better place to live in is very important. It\'s because local community could play a key role to provide comfortable surrounding for their people which the state can\'t provide. >> It\'s because our local community can play a key role in providing comfortable surroundings for the people, which the state can\'t provide. One of our community differences from others is people\'s voluntary service for their community people. >> One thing that sets our community apart from the others is the voluntary service by the people.Our community is providing study rooms for students free of charge, many community people are volunteering to keep the place free of charge.>> Our community is providing study rooms for students free of charge and many community people are volunteering to keep the place that way. I guess this is possible that they think our community people as like family members. >> I guess it\'s because we think of the people in our community as family members.