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2016-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Every scnery in world is so bueatiful and amazing.. Especaily, there are peaceful and bueatiful scneries in Australia.. Fields are green and streets are not that busy.. And also, beaches in thphilippines are really bueatiful.. I went hopping tour in Cebu. The color of sea was amazing... The weather makes the sky perfect.. I want to go there now..hehe 1. I haven't really studied for this exam, so I feel a little nervous. 2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway. 3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first. 4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes. 5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

The world is lovely in your eyes. ^^;

I\'ve always loved the scenery in my country, too.

But lately, I have been enjoying the sight of the night sky in the early morning.

It makes me feel peaceful each time I look up at the sky before I go to work every morning.

The only constellation I could find was the Big Dipper. ^^;

I hope you\'ll have a beautiful day at work today!

Take care!

Teacher Anne

 

Every scnery in world is so bueatiful and amazing..

>> Every scenery in the world is so beautiful and amazing.
Especaily, there are peaceful and bueatiful scneries in Australia..

>> Especially in Australia where there are many peaceful and beautiful sights.
Fields are green and streets are not that busy..

>> The fields were green and the streets were not that busy.
And also, beaches in thphilippines are really bueatiful..

>> The beaches in the Philippines are also really beautiful.
I went hopping tour in Cebu. The color of sea was amazing...

>> I went on an island hopping tour in Cebu. The color of the sea was amazing.
The weather makes the sky perfect.. I want to go there now..hehe
>> The weather made the sky perfect. I want to go there now. Hehe.
1. I haven\'t really studied for this exam, so I feel a little nervous.
>> Correct!
2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway.
>> Correct!
3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first.
>> unless
4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes.
>> Correct!
5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis.

>> Correct!

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