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Hi Miss [이름]!
The world is lovely in your eyes. ^^;
I\'ve always loved the scenery in my country, too.
But lately, I have been enjoying the sight of the night sky in the early morning.
It makes me feel peaceful each time I look up at the sky before I go to work every morning.
The only constellation I could find was the Big Dipper. ^^;
I hope you\'ll have a beautiful day at work today!
Take care!
Teacher Anne
Every scnery in world is so bueatiful and amazing..
>> Every scenery in the world is so beautiful and amazing.
Especaily, there are peaceful and bueatiful scneries in Australia..
>> Especially in Australia where there are many peaceful and beautiful sights.
Fields are green and streets are not that busy..
>> The fields were green and the streets were not that busy.
And also, beaches in thphilippines are really bueatiful..
>> The beaches in the Philippines are also really beautiful.
I went hopping tour in Cebu. The color of sea was amazing...
>> I went on an island hopping tour in Cebu. The color of the sea was amazing.
The weather makes the sky perfect.. I want to go there now..hehe
>> The weather made the sky perfect. I want to go there now. Hehe.
1. I haven\'t really studied for this exam, so I feel a little nervous.
>> Correct!
2. I told him not to come, but he came anyway.
>> Correct!
3. Do not do anything since you hear from him first.
>> unless
4. Since I was really tired, I took a nap for 15 minutes.
>> Correct!
5. While she likes to play basketball, her favorite sport is tennis.
>> Correct!
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