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2016-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. My husband is still sleeping. He watched a lot of Korean TV program until late last night. He is not that free to enjoy Korean TV program although he can access them online. He seems to keep enjoying them until leaving for Malaysia. Would you rather have a beautiful and grandiose home in the countryside or an ordinary and small home in the city? I don't care for living in a grandiose home. I'm going to be hard to clean the big house. There are just three family members in my family. So, we don't need to have a big house. However, if I could have a beautiful and grandiose home in the countryside, I would live there when I get older. If the house has a field that I can grow some vegetables, it would be a perfect place to live for our couples because we love farming. However, we are satisfied with our ordinary and small home now since this city provides us with a lot of convenient facilities to use.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I totally agree with you. It would be better to move to the countryside when you get older. For now, it\'s important to live in the city and earn money for your future. Thanks for doing your homework. Keep it up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! My husband is still sleeping. >> CORRECT! He watched a lot of Korean TV programs until late last night. >> CORRECT! He is not that free to enjoy Korean TV program although he can access them online. >> He doesn\'t have much free time to enjoy Korean TV programs even though he can access them online. He seems to keep enjoying them until leaving for Malaysia. >> He seems to be enjoying them until he leaves for Malaysia again.I don\'t care for living in a grandiose home. >> I don\'t care much for living in a grandiose home.I\'m going to be hard to clean the big house. >> It\'s going to be hard for me to clean a big house.There are just three family members in my family. >> There are just three people in my family. OR >> My family only has three members.So, we don\'t need to have a big house. >> CORRECT! However, if I could have a beautiful and grandiose home in the countryside, I would live there when I get older. >> CORRECT! If the house has a field that I can grow some vegetables, it would be a perfect place to live for our couples because we love farming. >> If the house has a field where I can grow some vegetables, it would be perfect for my husband and me because we love farming. However, we are satisfied with our ordinary and small home now, since this city provides us with a lot of convenient facilities to use. >> CORRECT!

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