homework
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I met my friend previous 2 days before.
She told me that she do p a big mistakes.
She is doing exercise regularly at the gym.
During exercise, she got along with a another girl at the gym.
One day, After finishing exercise, They had lunch time with a little beer.
And then they set apart and went each their home. My friend was felt a deep sleep.
At every 5 pm, She has to go daycare center to bring her children.
But that day, she couldn't awake, she was still deep sleep.
At last, The teacher called her husband, He came to daycare center to bring children.
And then, When he and child came back, she still felt a sleep.
he was very angry. And she was caught red handed.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I met my friend previous 2 days before.
>> I met my friend two days ago.She told me that she do p a big mistakes.
>> She told me that she made a big mistake.She is doing exercise regularly at the gym.
>> She regularly exercises at the gym.During exercise, she got along with a another girl at the gym.
>> She got along with a girl while exercising at the gym.One day, After finishing exercise, They had lunch time with a little beer.
>> One day, they had lunch with a bottle of beer after they had their workout.And then they set apart and went each their home. My friend was felt a deep sleep.
>> My friend fell asleep at her home.At every 5 pm, She has to go daycare center to bring her children.
>> She has to fetch her child in the daycare center at 5 P.M. every dayBut that day, she couldn\'t awake, she was still deep sleep.
>> But at that day, she couldn\'t wake up because she deeply fell asleep.At last, The teacher called her husband, He came to daycare center to bring children.>> The teacher called her husband to fetch their kid.
And then, When he and child came back, she still felt a sleep. >> Her husband and child went back home but she was still sleeping.
he was very angry. And she was caught red handed.
>> Her husband was very angry because she was caught red handed.
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