Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
My husband left for Malaysia yesterday.
I was so busy spending time with my family.
We visited my mother-in-law's house and my parent's house because my husband came to Korea in a long time.
Things have been really hectic.
Anyway, below is my homework for last Friday.
What is the nicest thing a friend has ever done for you?
I have 5 valuable friends, and they are all university friends.
They gave me some presents when my son entered elementary school.
Then, I never expected that they gave me some presents for my son.
I was really touched by their consideration.
What they love my son like their kids is the nicest thing they had ever done for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for doing your homework. You are so lucky to have true friends who are very thoughtful especially to you and your son. Cheers to your more years of friendship!^^
Hello, teacher.
>> Correct.My husband left for Malaysia yesterday.
>> Correct.I was so busy spending time with my family.
>> Correct.We visited my mother-in-law\'s house and my parent\'s house because my husband came to Korea in a long time.
>> Did you mean: We visited my mother-in-law\'s house and my parents\' house because my husband came to Korea a long time ago.Things have been really hectic.
>> Correct.Anyway, below is my homework for last Friday.>> Anyway, below is my homework last Friday.What is the nicest thing a friend has ever done for you?I have 5 valuable friends, and they are all university friends.
>> I have 5 valuable friends, and they are all my university friends.>> or: I have five important university friends.
They gave me some presents when my son entered elementary school.
>> Correct.Then, I never expected that they gave me some presents for my son.
>> Then, I never expected some presents that they gave for my son.>> I never expected the presents they gave to my son.I was really touched by their consideration.
>> Correct.
>> or: I was really touched by their thoughtfulness or generosity.What they love my son like their kids is the nicest thing they had ever done for me.
>> When they showed their love for my son like their own kid, that is the nicest thing they have ever done for me.
>> The nicest thing they have ever done for me is when they loved my son like their own kid.
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