homework
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I disagree that people should only read something specific and real. When it comes to specific contents, there are true stories, fact articles, biographical writing and so on. I think reading various genre would be helpful for people to grow their thoughts. So to speak fiction will be great to read like novel, fairy tale. Those make people imagine while they are reading and others can be impressible. As I remember, some of my classmates who really enjoyed reading novel were clever and creative. Whereas, reading real stories is also surely good to widen other’s knowledge and personally I like to read it since I believe it will be helpful to broaden my idea from author’s experience. That’s because most of books I have are about self-development. Although I know the importance of reading novel, actually I don’t usually read it because of habit. If I read many novels I might be more sensitive and creative. So reading many parts is important to people without choice
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday [이름]!
Good job in writing about the assigned composition topic.
One thing though; novels could be fiction or non-fiction so it\'s best to be exact about which one you\'re referring to which is why I chose to use the terms \"fiction\" and \"non-fiction\".
See you later!
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I disagree that people should only read something specific and real.
>> CORRECT
When it comes to specific contents, there are true stories, fact articles, biographical writing and so on. I think reading various genre would be helpful for people to grow their thoughts. So to speak fiction will be great to read like novel, fairy tale. Those make people imagine while they are reading and others can be impressible.
>> There is a wide array when it comes to book\'s contents like true stories, articles, biographies and so on and I think reading varied material would be helpful for people to broaden their horizons. Fiction, like fantasy novels, is actually great to read since this can stimulate people\'s imaginations and leave lasting impression.
As I remember, some of my classmates who really enjoyed reading novel were clever and creative.
>> As I recall, some of my classmates who really enjoyed reading fiction were clever and creative.
Whereas, reading real stories is also surely good to widen other’s knowledge and personally I like to read it since I believe it will be helpful to broaden my idea from author’s experience.
>> On the other hand, reading non-ficiton, which I personally enjoy, is also beneficial in augmenting ideas and knowledge basing on the author\'s experience.
That’s because most of books I have are about self-development. Although I know the importance of reading novel, actually I don’t usually read it because of habit. If I read many novels I might be more sensitive and creative. So reading many parts is important to people without choice
>> Most books that I read are self-help books and even though I am aware of the importance of reading non-fiction, I don\'t usually do because of taste. Then again, if I had read a ton of non-fiction, I could have been more sensitive and creative. My point is it is important for people to read through different genres of written literature.
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