homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I am workaholic, I can't take care of my children.
Also I can't be happy with my family.
Working is very important in our life but it is not important more than family.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
A warm Tuesday morning! Summer is really here. It\'s hot this morning.
Thank you for doing your homework. I do love hearing your thoughts on the topics I give for your homework.
I can see that your family is your priority. As Michael J. Fox said, \"Family is not an important thing. It is everything.\"
Have a great day!
T. Lynn
If I am workaholic, I can\'t take care of my children.
>> correctAlso I can\'t be happy with my family.
>>I can\'t also be happy with my family.Working is very important in our life but it is not important more than family.
>>Work is very important but not as important as our family.
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