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You are right! I also thought that I would be thin..hehe
It is so sad..ㅜㅜ
I normally listen to my parents whenevr I have a problem...
Even though we have different jobs, they have experienced so many things..
and also they are thoughtful..
but somtimes also friends can give good advices to me..because they can understand me better..
1.I can't make up what you wrote here.
2.He was offered a job, but her turned it down .
3.We ran into an old friend of ours on the way to the store.
4.I was going to stop talking, but he told me to go on.
5.She made up a story about being sick, but everyone knew she was lying.
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Hi Miss [이름]!
Whenever I remember my younger self, I really regret not caring more about my weight. Haha!
But eating delicious food is really hard to stop.
So nowadays, I just try to eat a small portion of it.
I\'ve also tried to stop eating breakfast on weekdays. ^^
I hope it will help me lose weight. ^^;
See you!
Teacher Anne
You are right! I also thought that I would be thin..hehe
>> Correct!It is so sad..ㅜㅜ
>> Correct!I normally listen to my parents whenevr I have a problem...
>> Correct! [whenever]Even though we have different jobs, they have experienced so many things..
>> Correct!and also they are thoughtful..
>> Correct!but somtimes also friends can give good advices to me..because they can understand me better..
>> but sometimes, my friends can also give me good pieces of advice, because they can understand me better.1.I can\'t make up what you wrote here.
>> make out2.He was offered a job, but her turned it down .
>> Correct! [he]3.We ran into an old friend of ours on the way to the store.
>> Correct!4.I was going to stop talking, but he told me to go on.
>> Correct!5.She made up a story about being sick, but everyone knew she was lying.
>> Correct!
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