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Hi Miss [이름]!
When I saw the ending of \"If Only\" I have to say I hated it.
On the other hand, it was good because the man finally realized that life is precious.
It was a very good movie, considering the fact that it was made in Hollywood. ^^;
The ending was still terrible for me, though. Haha.
But maybe if he really loved the woman that much, he didn\'t regret changing their destiny.
Thanks for sharing, Miss [이름]!
Teacher Anne
Thanks so much for concerning about my heath..
>> Thank you so much for being concerned about my health.
I hope that you would be healthy too..^^
>> Correct!
It sounds terrible..
>> Correct!
I remember the movie \"if only\"
>> Correct!
In the movie, he had a bad day..
>> Correct!
I hope that you could watch this...
>> Correct!
I think I could stand the situation so I would be under the cloud..
>> Correct!
but I will believe that tomorrow will be better..hehe
>> Correct!
1. He\'s a young charming doctor.
>> He\'s a charming young doctor.
2. I plan on wearing my long black coat.
>> Correct!
3. This is a well-known French painting from the 18th century.
>> Correct!
4. She was wearing a beautiful green dress.
>> Correct!
5. The little poor bird! I\'m going to help it!
>> Correct!
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