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2016-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Thanks so much for concerning about my heath.. I hope that you would be healthy too..^^ It sounds terrible.. I remember the movie "if only" In the movie, he had a bad day.. I hope that you could watch this... I think I could stand the situation so I would be under the cloud.. but I will believe that tomorrow will be better..hehe 1. He's a young charming doctor. 2. I plan on wearing my long black coat. 3. This is a well-known French painting from the 18th century. 4. She was wearing a beautiful green dress. 5. The little poor bird! I'm going to help it!

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Hi Miss [이름]!

When I saw the ending of \"If Only\" I have to say I hated it.

On the other hand, it was good because the man finally realized that life is precious.

It was a very good movie, considering the fact that it was made in Hollywood. ^^;

The ending was still terrible for me, though. Haha.

But maybe if he really loved the woman that much, he didn\'t regret changing their destiny.

Thanks for sharing, Miss [이름]!

Teacher Anne

 

Thanks so much for concerning about my heath..

>> Thank you so much for being concerned about my health.
I hope that you would be healthy too..^^
>> Correct!
It sounds terrible..

>> Correct!
I remember the movie \"if only\"

>> Correct!
In the movie, he had a bad day..

>> Correct!
I hope that you could watch this...

>> Correct!
I think I could stand the situation so I would be under the cloud..

>> Correct!
but I will believe that tomorrow will be better..hehe
>> Correct!
1. He\'s a young charming doctor.

>> He\'s a charming young doctor.
2. I plan on wearing my long black coat.

>> Correct!
3. This is a well-known French painting from the 18th century.

>> Correct!
4. She was wearing a beautiful green dress.

>> Correct!
5. The little poor bird! I\'m going to help it!

>> Correct!

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