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I can't live without the air..hehe ofcourse...kidding
I think I can't live without people...
I want to be alone sometimes but I miss people later...like families friends..
and so on..Whenever we are happy or sad, we need somebody to share these feelings..
1. I hardly ever eat at home anymore. I always eat out.
2.He tried to have two girlfriends at the same time, and ended up alone.
3.I thought my plan was brilliant, but in the end it fell through.
4.Here is the application. Please fill it out and return it to me.
5.My neighbors and I don't get along.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I can\'t live without food! ^^ Haha!
Me too. I can\'t live without people.
I like to be alone sometimes.
But I think too much time spent alone is unhealthy.
I\'m so glad I have friends and family who talk to me.
Life is a beautiful gift.
Spend it wisely! ^^
Teacher Anne
I can\'t live without the air..hehe ofcourse...kidding
>> Correct! [of course]I think I can\'t live without people...
>> Correct!I want to be alone sometimes but I miss people later...like families friends..
>> Correct!and so on..Whenever we are happy or sad, we need somebody to share these feelings..
>> Correct!1. I hardly ever eat at home anymore. I always eat out.
>> Correct!2.He tried to have two girlfriends at the same time, and ended up alone.>> Correct!
3.I thought my plan was brilliant, but in the end it fell through.
>> Correct!4.Here is the application. Please fill it out and return it to me.
>> Correct!5.My neighbors and I don\'t get along.
>> Correct!
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