homework!!

2016-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.We met _during__ the Xmas holidays 2.I learned French _while___ I was working in a wine bar in Paris. 3.It happened _while___ I was out. 4.It happened __during__ my lunchbreak. 5.It happened _during__ the flooding. 6.It happened __during_ the floods. 7.I fell alseep ___during__ the film. 8.I fell alseep ___while__ I was watching the film. 9.We had a lot of trouble __during__ the journey. 10.__during__ working there, I met some really nice people.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

You almost got a perfect score. ^^

Have a great day.
Please go over item #10.

See you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina

1.We met _during__ the Xmas holidays
>> correct
2.I learned French _while___ I was working in a wine bar in Paris.
>> correct
3.It happened _while___ I was out.
>> correct
4.It happened __during__ my lunchbreak.
>> correct

5.It happened _during__ the flooding.
>> correct
6.It happened __during_ the floods.
>> correct
7.I fell alseep ___during__ the film.
>> correct
8.I fell alseep ___while__ I was watching the film.
>> correct
9.We had a lot of trouble __during__ the journey.
>> correct
10.__during__ working there, I met some really nice people.

>> While

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